Country Lane


Country Lane came about through a wonderful online workshop I attended with eco-poet and creative writer Jason Conway. For me, it represents the first acceptance of the journey I’ve been on with my cancer diagnosis and treatment.

Update: I was thrilled to learn this poem was a winner in the Space In-Between Festival Poetry Competition! The standard of work throughout was high but even better were the many supportive people involved. Thank you!


Country Lane

Driving along a country lane,
Twists and turns I can’t see past.
Tall green hedgerows either side,
Mountains not of my making.

The miles speed by unheeded.
Above, I hold onto a sliver of sky,
Around, only an incoherent blur.
I hit the brake but it doesn't respond.

All at once -- a fallen tree.
I swerve and find only the verge.
We’re a bottle spinning on a floor.
The car finds a gap in the hedgerow.

I'm finally come to rest.

In the near silence there is only
The ticking of the still-warm engine,
The pounding of my temples;
The beating of my heart.

With shaking legs, I flee the car.
Lie down in the warm grass;
Lift my face to the sun.
Now I can see the whole sky.

Close by, unseen, a cricket is fiddling,
The swaying grass is a quiet timpani.
In that moment, I hear a whisper, no louder:
“All will be well. All will be well.”

Lucy H.

Lucy is the founder of The Rainbow Poems. She is a mum of two and former lawyer whose life took a swerve when career change and cancer came calling. She now lives in rural Germany with her husband and sons. Lucy has recently restarted creative writing, three decades after her last piece!

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